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Silly clock
the seconds bringing death for everyone to enjoy
no mercy
no life
tic
toc
goes this clock
counting down your life
tic
toc
goes its chant
harrasing you from the wall
watching you suffer
this clock, bearer of your mistakes to come
forever written in stone
you've stolen my life and you cant begin to pay
tic toc
silly mr clock
©2005-2008 ~storyofnothing
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im sure its been done before. but not by me yet. so...consider it a re run of uninspired poetry...

yeah.
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~Dragonj1080:iconDragonj1080: Feb 12, 2005, 7:26:05 PM
amazing job. the personification of the clock reminds me of those felix the cat clocks, where the black and white cat is smiling and his tail is the second hand, swinging back and forth with his eyes.